Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody.
Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take #guywithguitar recordings with additional vocals and instruments.
Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #acoustic #guitar #singersongwriter
Lyrics
Everything I want Is under this roof All I could ever ask for Right here, under this roof Everything I need Is under this roof Every little thing I’m longing for Right here, under this roof
There's music playing in every single room Sunshine pouring through the trees outside Feeling creative, my guitar is tuned I'll stay at home, won’t go out tonight.
We dance in the kitchen, kick off our shoes Every corner is filled with love and light No weather forecast, no need to watch the news Under this roof, everything’s just right.
Everything I want Is under this roof All I could ever ask for Right here, under this roof Everything I need Is under this roof Every little thing I’m longing for Right here, under this roof
There’s coffee brewing, the smell fills the air The speakers play the songs I just wrote Comfy sofa, we’ve got no worries, no cares We’ll stay at home, we like to take it slow.
The rain's tapping softly, a sweet melody Stories 'round the table tonight Happy to stay inside, warm as we can be Under this roof, everything feels right.
Just sing along, leave your worries behind Under this roof, it’s all sunshine We don’t need much, just love and time It’s all right here, and that’s just fine.
Everything I want Is under this roof All I could ever ask for Right here, under this roof Everything I need Is under this roof Every little thing I’m longing for Right here, under this roof
What a bright happy theme, and the instrumentation hops right along with it. Love the positivity. "it's all sunshine / we don't need much, just love and time", great line. Each little vignette paints such a blissful story. Really like the idea of music playing in each room as well.
@gfandme - 2025-02-07
Great start for FAWM!
@bitshred - 2025-02-04
Love this sentiment! These are all my favorite things and it’s nice to practice gratitude
@cluebird66 - 2025-02-04
Love the melody and message and your voice and arrangement are perfect for this sweet song. Also love your sharing your method. My favorite submission so far!
@axl - 2025-02-03
Sounds lovely and hits an emotional spot since the refrain expresses a deep wish of mine I can't seem to fulfil. You sound so positive, it's giving me a nice push.
@dmce - 2025-02-02
Damn you're quick π Sounds great Max!
@willow1 - 2025-02-02
Sweet tune!
@stepanskyj - 2025-02-02
That's such a refreshing chorus, instantly put a smile on my face!
@tspoon - 2025-02-01
Wow, what a ray of sunshine and positive energy to begin the FAWM process! great song, performance and vibe..
@namjunerobot - 2025-02-01
Great things happening under that roof ;)
@nuj4x - 2025-02-01
I love it! I always tell people that my favorite place on Earth is my house and when they're like WHY!? I'm like because all my stuff is here. All the things I've decided I want is here. All the things I work every day for, is here. This is the best place EVER! Your song reflects that in a catchy ear-worm sort of way. I dig it. Awesome job dude!
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-01
Wonderfully upbeat with an earworm melody... and with a heartwarming message too. And it sounds like you've nailed your workflow for speedy creation
@toms - 2025-02-01
When the musicianship is good, the simplest workflow is best! Fantastic start, Max
@coolparadiso - 2025-02-01
Good start mate! Good to hear you again, nicely chilled start
@chill4matt - 2025-02-01
This is pretty great. The vocals, the lyrics, the strumming. Nice work!
@sapient - 2025-02-01
This is just pure joy! Gratitude has such power, especially when things outisde sometimes kinda sucks. Already this is one of my favourite ones I've heard from you. I love it. What a wonderful start! π π―
@timfatchen - 2025-02-01
Ah Max, back to your old tricks, eh? I won't compete for the last song of FAWM! Thanks for the extended explanation on your workflow. One day when i grow old I'll get myself organised. And be it said, this is a good FAWM start, upbeat and general but immediately applicable lyrics.
@jinx - 2025-02-01
Danceable and wholesome! This song brings sunshine to a grey February day.
@joeycyclone - 2025-02-01
Great way to kick off FAWM, lovely energy and perfect sentiment in the lyrics
#skirmish #improv #acousticguitar #macaronic A “Songskirmish” — or simply “Skirmish” for short — is a timed challenge in which participants each create their own piece, but they are all inspired by the same prompt. A skirmish begins at a predetermined time when the prompt is released by the Skirmish host. The Skirmish lasts for approximately 60 minutes. A quick improv, with some dutch lyrics in it. Warming up with the first skirmish in 2025. Thank you @ajna1960 for hosting. https://write.fawm.org/songs/skirmishes/454 done in one hour after the prompt was given.
Lyrics
o wee hoo that’s a truly impressive pile of cheese you've got that’s a truly impressive pile of cheese you've got that’s a truly impressive pile of cheese
but let me tell you one thing it’s not goodha or cowda no it’s not it’s Gouda o wee hoo that’s a truly impressive pile of cheese you've got Gouda lekkere Goudse kaas Gouda lekkere Goudse kaas o wee hoo that’s a truly impressive pile of cheese you've got that’s a truly impressive pile of cheese you've got that’s a truly impressive pile of cheese
Well I think I’m gonna be singing this one all day! ππ΅
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-02
Goodha, cowda, Gouda .... dat is wel lekkere goudse kaas hoor :)
@jeff9 - 2025-02-02
Super catchy. And educational. Been saying it wrong forever, among too many things to mention.
@reinderd - 2025-02-01
That's hilarious and catchy!
@ajna1960 - 2025-02-01
Oh what a fun start to FAWM ! I enjoyed this one, wished it was longer.
@jeremykazoo - 2025-02-01
I'd love to hear this one by a full punk or ska band! Fun take on the prompt!!
@erbaer - 2025-02-01
Gouda you do it? Great take on the prompt!
@johnstaples - 2025-02-01
Yay! A fun cheese song AND I learned how to pronounce GOUDA! You really put some fun energy into this one and I enjoyed it a lot! Now I want some gouda! Nice skirmishing!!
@p3t3h4rv3y - 2025-02-01
Thanks for the pronunciation tip! Acoustic punk cheese
@jibbidy34 - 2025-02-01
Haha! Yeah!!! Funny I always pronounced it G-ow-da after living in Germany but in the UK they say Goo-da. Either way it’s a tasty slice of a song! Well done Max
@newukenewyork - 2025-02-01
Digging your energy -- this feels like acoustic punk, and I mean that in a really positive way. Love hearing the languages mixed, too. I learned a word for this recently. "Macaronic" -- I think I'll make a #macaronic challenge in the forums and you've already completed it. :)
@maaike - 2025-02-01
π You tell them!! Fun song.
3. ✵ A Shot In The Dark
2025-02-02
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/a-shot-in-the-dark Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #singer-songwriter #acoustic #guywithguitar
Lyrics
I thought it was just a shot in the dark I thought it was just a shot in the dark
In a world like mine, it is hard to trust The moment I met you, doubt turned to dust Not easy to find love and peace within We hold on tight, we’re sure we can win
I thought it was just a shot in the dark A fleeting chance, a hopeful spark
Every step with you feels so real and so light I never thought I would have you by my side Delighted we found each other's heart Together we can try, make a brand new start
I thought it was just a shot in the dark A fleeting chance, a hopeful spark I thought it was just a shot, just a shot in the dark I thought it was just a shot, just a shot in the dark
This has such a feel of a song from a film (60s or 70s, I'd guess). Makes me think of artists like Scott Walker (who I love). Beautiful.
@sycophant - 2025-02-19
Man. Been a while since I listened to your stuff at the beginning of FAWM ‘25… I love your voice and that guitar strum and production gives it a great wall of sound. Another very cool song.
@chill4matt - 2025-02-02
Digging both your audio and the video production! Awesome! Keep on!
@celineellis - 2025-02-02
Agree with Roger, it has a nice rolling feel with the 2 chord vamp. Reminds me a lot of Radiohead in its melodic choices as well, which is really well done when only using 2 chords
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-02
Love the rolling vibe on this one Max. Can't beat a good melodic love song.
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/deadlocked Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #singersongwriter #acousticguitar #folkpunk
Lyrics
I’m not asking for perfection just a way to move ahead But it’s all slowing down and we’re circling instead
Can’t we find a common ground hope for a kinder way? I’m trying to hold the pieces but they’re slipping day by day
Everything feels deadlocked no solution, no way out Common sense is blocked a status quo, big black cloud
Now every voice is hardened no one bends, no one sways The walls keep getting higher and we're lost inside this maze
What happened to progression? a path, once so clear, so bright Now compromise is shattered and we’re losing every fight
Everything feels deadlocked no solution, no way out Common sense is blocked a status quo, big black cloud
The air is thick with silence as they argue just to win And the hope I used to carry feels like it's wearing thin And the hope I used to carry feels like it's wearing thin And the hope I used to carry feels like it's wearing thin
Everything feels deadlocked no solution, no way out Common sense is blocked a status quo, big black cloud
Love your voice on this one. Good key for you, nice and raspy. And you're singing the state of the world with a happy kinda bounce. That's my jam. Very nice thx for posting this
@tspoon - 2025-02-03
I really enjoyed the bouncy positivity in an otherwise hopeless topic. Your method is amazing, and your efficiency is incredible. your system seems to work as your production is crazy good. love this!
@sycophant - 2025-02-03
This is incredible. Possibly my favourite FAWM song so far! Love people with the ability to entertain with just their voice and a guitar. Really cool. Can't wait to hear what else you come up with.
@namjunerobot - 2025-02-02
One of the reasons I respect what you do is that you're free and can stand on the merits of your songs bones. I'm a creature of sound, while not perfect, I love the process of layering and tweaking things. That's the fun for me. That aside, this is a great song. You're very prolific! I feel the sentiment and yes, I feel the same way at times.
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-02
Great 50's vibe with a very modern concern. I hear echoes of Louis Armstrong here and there. Even the baa baa baa could be trumpeted. The melody is as catchy as ever and the mood is warm and sweet. Another nice one, Max.
I had a line, thought it would kill, Brought it to the table, chasing the thrill. First, the silence—then came the sighs, Shaking heads and rolling eyes.
I stood my ground, I made my case, “Said this one’s gold, just give it space!” They just laughed, crossed it out, But in my mind, there’s still no doubt.
“Sorry, it’s just not funny enough Funny ynnuf, funny ynnuf it’s just not funny enough”
I swear it works, I feel it land, But they don’t bite, don’t understand. And one day, they will see, This joke is pure comedy.
Tried a twist, gave it a spin, Raised my voice, forced a grin. Still, they said, “Nah, let it die,” I still don’t know why.
“Sorry, it’s just not funny enough Funny ynnuf, funny ynnuf it’s just not funny enough”
They cut it loose, it’s off the page, But in my head, it owns the stage. One day soon, they’re gonna see, This joke was gold—it’s not just me.
Maybe in another room, Another time, another mood. Someone hears it, cracks a smile, And suddenly, it’s worthwhile.
“Sorry, it’s just not funny enough Funny ynnuf, funny ynnuf it’s just not funny enough”
One day, someone’s gonna see, This joke’s really funny… they will agree. One day, someone’s gonna see, This joke was funny… they will agree.
Lovely song, great palindromic groove and I laughed out loud when I realised Funny ynnuf
@deandra - 2025-02-08
I so relate! :) Impressive!
@paulhenry - 2025-02-06
Have you invented a new palindromic form? The audiophonic palindrome?
@mikegtz - 2025-02-06
An interesting way to portray vulnerability via palindrome. I think it works. Nice job, Max.
@quadrivium - 2025-02-05
I love both the palindrome 'Funny Ynnuf' and the groovy back and forth chord progression! And I relate to the subject. I frequently crack myself up, and then everyone is just looking at me like, ‘whut?’ Such a fun song and a wonderful use of the prompt!
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-04
Clever palindrome! Very groovy chord change back and forth on the Am Amaj7. Creates a kinda cool-cat vibe .. oooh yeaaah. And you can't beat bad Dad-jokes ... which are almost never funny ynuff in my personal experience :)
@jorh - 2025-02-03
This is awesome; big props for that palindrome haha (funny y-nuff), I was impressed with just that by itself π The internal dialogue works a treat, and very relatable message - how many of us you laugh at your own jokes and find ourselves funnier than other people do!!
@sapient - 2025-02-03
Ah, nicely done! A great way to hit this week's challenge, and that is a super chill bossanova vibe you've summoned π
@hankbanks - 2025-02-03
Oh this great! Funny ynnuf is such a fun palindrome. Love the simple instrumentation and vox effects on your voice. For some reason the music really transports to those social situations that feel like a contest of wit.
@markfulwider - 2025-02-03
Love the wordplay in this one! Funny ynnuf for me too! Hahahaha!
@neuewut - 2025-02-03
love how you created tension over several verses - definitely funny ynuff for me! π
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/didnt-work-out Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #three-chord #guywithguitar #single-mic
Lyrics
It didn’t work out the way I wanted It didn’t work out the way I had it in mind
The choices made pulling at my mind don’t know what went wrong I’m trying to rewind The harder I try The less I understand With every step I take I’m sinking deeper in the sand
It didn’t work out the way I wanted It didn’t work out the way I had it in mind It didn’t work out the way I wanted It didn’t work out the way I had it in mind
Is it pride or fear that kept me in the blind Maybe the deeds I did The thoughts I left behind Is it all bad luck is it something out of hand I’m caught in the middle of a broken plan
It didn’t work out the way I wanted It didn’t work out the way I had it in mind It didn’t work out the way I wanted It didn’t work out the way I had it in mind
I like the darker guitar sound on this one compared to other songs of yours I’ve heard… it adds a sense of sadness to the song that matches the lyric.
@sml - 2025-02-06
I love the chords in this song. Also, the theme of "how much of this is my fault or is something else I have little to no control over" works great here. It seems like this would be good to play live with a band, lots of energy.
@tspoon - 2025-02-05
Sorry it didn’t work out. But I’d say the song works great. I like the shadowy video effects and appreciate your process. Sounds great despite the fact it didn’t work out in your mind. π
@jeremykazoo - 2025-02-05
Oh this song scratches an itch. This is one I can toss on a playlist. Respect to your FAWM ways but I would really love hearing this with a full rock band treatment. A+
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/switch-places Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #nudity #ska #acousticguitar
Lyrics
Love it when we switch places during our morning shower You’re done reaching for a towel I step in and hold you for a while
That moment we share the cabin together I feel so fine, my heart’s full of joy It may be brief, but I’m so glad to hold you What a way, what a way, what a way to start the day
My arms wrapped around your body Feels so good I close my eyes If only this could last forever Ahhh.... duty calls We need to move on
That moment we share while switching places I feel so fine, my heart’s full of joy It may be brief, but I’m so glad to hold you What a way, what a way, what a way to start the day
What a way to start the what a way to start the day What a way to start the what a way to start the day What a way, what a way, what a way to start the day What a way, what a way, what a way to start the day
What an interesting workflow. I might try it myself! I have never managed to sync audio with video though. Really fun uplifting song as well. A positive start of the day indeed.
@chasingandromeda - 2025-02-10
This sits in a really nice pocket throughout. Great tempo for this. Great upbeat track.
@kaminokai - 2025-02-05
Very fun. Great live sound.
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-05
What a way to start a day indeed! Bright and cheery. That one woke me up and got me moving.
Ah, this is grand. What a wonderful way to bring such sweet lyrics to life!
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-06
This is such a singalong. I like the pacing.... meandering melodically along like whistling walker. I was joining in with the chorus at half way through. Sweet lyrics too.
@coolparadiso - 2025-02-06
I loved the lyric when I saw it! This is really good delivery of it! Straighforward and easy to listen to!
@katestantonsings - 2025-02-06
This is so heartwarming and lovely! The guitar is perfect for this set of lyrics. Well done!
@jaxmuzak - 2025-02-05
Really like this! That major 3 chord in the verse is esp. tasty π
@srcoops - 2025-02-05
Very nice indeed. Thanks for doing this one.
@cts - 2025-02-05
I agree, Max. FAWM wouldn’t be complete without a Collab with @srcoops. I get a real joy out of arranging music to his lyrics; especially when he fondly writes of his wife. How cool is that. Your bring a breezy vibe to this one, and I think it reflects a sentiment of steadfastness and love. Also pretty cool to see you perform, bud! Very nice work, gents! π―
@max - 2025-02-05
Thanks you Sir! https://maxvanremmerden.wordpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2025/01/srcoops.png
9. ✵ No Advice
2025-02-06
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/no-advice Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #guywithguitar #single-mic #acoustic
Lyrics
I’ve chased foolish dreams thought I knew how to turn the page I traveled many roads from A to B simply because I tried
One would expect I’d finally reached the age To be old and wise, old and wise enough One would expect I’d finally reached the age To be old and wise, old and wise enough
To tell you how everything should be done but the truth is, no advice no I have none
I have tried steadying my mind to be kind and find-ing my own way where it ends,well, no one knows life’s not easy but feel free enjoy the ride!
One would expect I’d finally reached the age To be old and wise, old and wise enough One would expect I’d finally reached the age To be old and wise, old and wise enough
To tell you how everything should be done but the truth is, no advice no I have none
I held on to simple thoughts learned a lot glad I got a chance each day you will find out how it goes try to see you will be your own guide
One would expect I’d finally reached the age To be old and wise, old and wise enough One would expect I’d finally reached the age To be old and wise, old and wise enough
To tell you how everything should be done but the truth is, no advice no I have none yeah the truth is, no advice no I have none yeah the truth is, no advice no I have none
Very cool vocal melody in the chorus. It has a real sing-song sense about it. I could see this being an absolute banger on love music night down the pub… I know I would certainly be singing along!
@burr - 2025-02-06
"old and wise, old and wise enough" <<< i guess that's what we're striving for, huh? and yet, in the end, everybody has to be their own guide as you say. thanks for being on this journey for 20 years, max... and i'm digging the zine aesthetic in your demo videos the last few years, too. π€
@williamjames - 2025-02-06
Very cool setup for recording. I will have to try that although the noise in the house mostly prevents this style. You sound really good here. I absolutely would believe this is multitracked. Nice introspective lyrics and your vocal lines flow seamlessly with the music. Very well done!
@rollasoc - 2025-02-06
Fun song, liking when the other vocals come in. I can imagine this being crowd sung at a festival.. :) Lyrics are really good!
This one in 2010: https://maxvanremmerden.bandcamp.com/album/5-second-songs This one in 2023: https://maxvanremmerden.bandcamp.com/album/10-second-songs This one in 2024: https://maxvanremmerden.bandcamp.com/album/15-second-songs-double-album To maintain continuity, this year I'm doing an album with 20-Second Songs. https://maxvanremmerden.bandcamp.com/album/20-second-songs My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments.
#10X10 #20x20 #folkpunk
Lyrics
01 WHO? WHO WILL DRIVE THE VAN? (WHO WILL DRIVE THE VAN?) WHO WILL PAY THE RENT? (WHO WILL PAY THE RENT?) WHO FILLS THE TANK? NO, NOT ME AGAIN NOT ME AGAIN
02 WORST DAYS NEVER FELT THIS BAD WORST DAYS OF MY LIFE THE WORLD’S GONE MAD WORST DAYS OF MY LIFE AND I CAN’T UNDERSTAND WHY WE’RE HERE AGAIN PLEASE MAKE IT END
03 TIME TICKING AWAY THERE GOES TODAY CAN’T GET IT BACK TIME’S SLIPPING RIGHT THROUGH MY HANDS IT’S GOING WAY IT’S GOING WAY TOO FAST
04 TOO LOUD THERE’S A NOISE IN MY HEAD IT’S LOUD ALL DAY I NEED TO FIND SOME PEACE BUT CAN’T ESCAPE JUST TURN IT OFF OR TURN IT DOWN GIVE ME A BREAK A WAY OUT IT’S MUCH TOO LOUD FOR F--K’S SAKE MAKE IT GO AWAY
05 OUT OF YOUR MIND ANOTHER DAY ANOTHER LIE JUST A PROMISE IN DISGUISE YOU DON’T CARE SO WHY SHOULD I YOU REALLY THINK THAT WE’RE ALL BLIND YOU’RE OUT OF YOUR MIND OUT OF YOUR MIND
06 FACE GONE BLUE FACE GONE BLUE IT’S ALL YOU DO SWIPE AND TAP GOT YOU IN A TRAP NOTHING LEFT TO SAY LOST ANOTHER DAY BREAK THE SPELL CAN’T YOU TELL YOU’RE A SCREEN ZOMBIE
07 WALK IN LINE GROWING UP THESE DAYS MIGHT MAKE YOU FEEL SCARED WELL YOU’RE RIGHT CAUSE NO ONE REALLY CARES ABOUT YOU OR THE WORLD YOU GET WHEN IT GOES WRONG THEY DON’T SHOW REGRET THEY TAKE YOUR LIFE, YOUR BREATH, YOUR TIME AND ALL THEY DO IS WALK IN LINE
08 www WORLD WAR WEB WE THOUGHT IT MEANT PROGRESS SUPPOSED TO BE FUN WE BELIEVED IN ACCESS FOR EACH AND EVERYONE BUT NOW IT TURNS OUT TO BE THE WORLD WAR WEB HATE AND STUPIDITY: THE WORLD WAR WEB RULED BY DICTATORS, FOLLOWED BY HATERS THE WORLD WAR WEB
09 HAPPY WHAT’S HAPPENED HERE IS THIS LIFE REAL JUST WANT TO KNOW HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE HAPPY AGAIN TO BE HAPPY AGAIN
10 DON’T FIT I DON’T FIT IN I NEVER WILL I WON’T GET IN THIS BOX YOU BUILT ALL THESE RULES THEY MAKE ME ILL ENOUGH FOOLS NOT SHOWING GUILT THEY FOLLOW YOU PREPARED TO KILL FOR YOU FOR YOU
11 NOT MY WAR NOT MY WAR NOT MY FIGHT NOT MY RULES NOT MY LIES NOT MY GUNS NOT MY SIDE NOT MY BOMBS NOT MY LIFE I WON’T KILL FOR YOU
12 SAME OLD SAME OLD I’M STUCK IN A WHIRLPOOL SPINNING, SPINNING AROUND NO MATTER WHAT I SAY WORLD IS SO COLD JUST WANT TO BREAK OUT AND GET BACK, GET BACK ON THE GROUND WHAT IS WRONG TODAY SAME OLD SAME OLD SAME OLD
13 IGNORANCE SO MANY SUBJECTS YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT BUT THAT DOESN'T STOP YOU FROM SCREAMING OUT LOUD YOU HAVE NO IDEA YOU JUST LIKE TO SHOUT IGNORANCE MAKES YOU FEEL PROUD
14 ABOUT TO SNAP CAN’T TAKE NO MORE I’M ABOUT TO SNAP ANY MOMENT NOW I’M PUSHED TOO FAR I’M ABOUT TO SNAP ANY MOMENT NOW
15 MUCH APPRECIATED THAT SMILE ON YOUR FACE JUST GAVE IT AWAY THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING MY DAY MUCH APPRECIATED MUCH APPRECIATED MUCH APPRECIATED MUCH APPRECIATED
16 MY TREES THE WIND PICKS UP THE SKY TURNS GRAY JUST HOLD ON THROUGH THIS STORMY DAY I’VE GOT MY EYE ON EVERY BRANCH AND LEAF DON’T FALL DOWN JUST STAY WITH ME PLEASE SURVIVE DON’T FALL DOWN
17 DESTROY COMES A TIME YOU REALIZE YOU’VE SEEN ALMOST EVERYTHING NOTHING’S REALLY A SURPRISE OOH EEH OOH BUT STILL YOU WONDER WHY WE KEEP DESTROYING EVERYTHING WHAT HAPPENED TO MANKIND OOH EEH OOH
18 SOMETHING SOMETHING ISN’T RIGHT WHAT’S THIS ALL ABOUT? SOMETHING ISN’T RIGHT WE NEED TO FIND OUT DOESN’T FEEL GOOD AT ALL MY FRIEND DOESN’T FEEL GOOD AT ALL
19 AFRAID OF LOVE YOU GET ANGRY OVER RAINBOW FLAGS THEY REALLY TRIGGER YOU YOU SAY YOU WANT TO PROTECT CHILDREN DIFFERENT FROM YOU YOU DON’T THINK IT’S OKAY TO BE HOW YOU FEEL SO YOU’RE PREACHING HATE CAUSE LOVE’S TOO REAL YOU’RE AFRAID OF LOVE YOU’RE AFRAID OF LOVE
20 WHAT YOU GET WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU GET IT WON’T GET ANY BETTER NO WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU GET IT WON’T GET ANY BETTER NO WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU GET
All of them-such a great song concept. Particularly loved 1, 2, 7 Cause no one really cares about you or the world you get, 10, 13, 16 & 19 Love the delivery on them and the messages. Relate much!
@williamjames - 2025-02-19
4 and 6 resonate. This is quite monumental. What could one even say? Monumental.
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-17
Fantastic, Max. For me, 1, 13, 14 and 17 stood out musically. But the words in the anti-war songs resonated too. The whole song is a build on your legendary idea of some years back, where you crammed 12 songs into one minute! https://maxvanremmerden.bandcamp.com/album/5-second-songs
@amlaperi - 2025-02-17
Love this idea! Especially digging songs no 3, 7, 13, 16 and 17! So cool!
@audreyrussell - 2025-02-17
The only problem with this is that I want to hear more of ALL of them!!! 8, 10, 13, and 20 are my faves, but they're all tasty!
@richaaaay - 2025-02-15
Love this concept. All twenty were great. If I had to pick my top five (which is tough), I'd pick 02, 05, 10, 13, 14
@bradbrubaker - 2025-02-12
My favorites were #2, #9 & #14 Other standouts were the takedown of #13 and the melody of #16
Impressive! I listened to it all. I love how creative and cohesive the entire project is. Well done, Max!
@kahlo2013 - 2025-02-07
Wow! 20 delicious pieces! They are all so well done and fun to listen too. #2 feels like a punk singalong that is timely and spot on! As does #9 and #13. Actually they all feel very relevant with keen perspective. Loved my listen!!!
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/guess-what Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #acoustic #guitar #liveinstruments
Lyrics
Guess what! You’ve got to let it go Guess what! You’ve got to let it go Guess what! You’ve got to let it go today
Throw in the towel, it’s not worth the fight Change your path before it’s out of sight There’s no hope left, nothing’s here for you Pick up the pieces, you know what to do Turn your back and say goodbye free yourself from ignorance and lies Let it go, take care of your mind Take a deep breath and don’t look behind
Guess what! You’ve got to let it go Guess what! You’ve got to let it go Guess what! You’ve got to let it go today
You gave your all, now it's time to withdraw Showed your heart, but they broke the law No point in fighting, no more to gain Even when it feels like you're drowning in pain
You know the truth, but you need to hear There’s no treasure, no prize near They bait the trap, but it’s time to stop Though it stings, you’ve got to let it drop
Guess what! You’ve got to let it go Guess what! You’ve got to let it go Guess what! You’ve got to let it go today
No point in fighting, no more to gain Even when it feels like you're drowning in pain
Really cool approach to the fawm presentation of your songs. Appreciate that. This is a fun song with a positive message, sing along material here. Enjoyed.
@akeli - 2025-02-08
Great process and great song! I need a lot of this simplification in my workflow. Not sure if I will reach that point - but maybe in about 20 years I am there? Your lyrics make sense, I like that. Keep on going!!!
@tspoon - 2025-02-08
Very bouncy and head bobbing tune here. It belies the frustration in the lyrics. Very apt advice for today’s world. Love it
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-08
Nailed another super-catchy tune, Max. You got me bopping again too. The song has tons of production possibilities too ... harmonies etc. I heard lively horn part in the chorus too. Another keeper under the belt!
@pcob1993 - 2025-02-08
Great song man, I love the whole vibe... the lyrics are great and you can certainly sing. What a blast... thank you so much for the inspiration. Pearse
#morsecode #challenge #muriel I tried to lalala the name of my wife in morsecode. It was much harder than I thought it would be. But hey, the weekly challenge is done! My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. https://avatars.fawm.org/fawm2025/9fba102d-c32c-4f0b-be91-00a9a809fcd0.png
Lyrics
In case we're trapped in the dark And our words fade away I will still call your name And send this song through the grey No one else will hear your name But I know you'll understand Imagine I am next to you Try to feel my hand -- ..- .-. .. . .-.. (Muriel) Laaa laaa, la la laaa, la laaa la La la, la, la laa la la
When they won’t let us speak And we’re lost behind these walls Try to hear my song Try to hear my call -- ..- .-. .. . .-.. Laaa laaa, la la laaa, la laaa la La la, la, la laa la la
-- ..- .-. .. . .-.. Laaa laaa, la la laaa, la laaa la La la, la, la laa la la
In case we're trapped in the dark And our words fade away I will still call your name And send this song through the grey
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/pebbles Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #metaphor #folk #shanty
Lyrics
A pebble tossed into the air a melody to show my care each line I write, a simple stone To show you’re never on your own
It’s not diamond, it's not gold It’s a piece of me you hold
Pebbles, pebbles, pebbles songs I wrote for you Each one tells a story every note is true Pebbles, pebbles, pebbles solid droplets of joy every piece a memory giving love a voice
A pebble placed inside your hand to feel the love it represents each verse I sing, a little gift a bridge that makes our spirits lift
It’s not diamond, it's not gold It’s a piece of me you hold
Pebbles, pebbles, pebbles songs I wrote for you Each one tells a story every note is true Pebbles, pebbles, pebbles solid droplets of joy every piece a memory giving love a voice
These pebbles mark a path we pave to the love we built, the love we save Every song, a step we take to the greatest gift that we create
Oeh Max I like the bardsmanship here. It's catchy, timeless and can be interpreted freely - I had to think of social pebbling which is a new take on an old concept I guess.
@ceilidh - 2025-02-09
I love the lyrics and your metaphor! I totally agree with @rogerhammond but the verse I loved was the last one about paving a path of love with the pebbles! A marvelous work shanty for songwriters!
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-09
Different style lyrically and musically. I like it! This is such a nice line "It’s not diamond, it's not gold It’s a piece of me you hold". The shanty feel invites a singalong.... I can see a bunch of people in a bar singing "pebbles, pebbles ..." while swaying a beer side to side.
This is fab!! I have no idea how to flip font, but you do! Perfect syncopation vocals and guitar, Wowzers.
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-12
Another hit Max. Love the ska beat. Can easily imagine flinging my legs around to this one. Insanely catchy chorus again. I was singing along at the end
@jacobwakeup - 2025-02-12
Came for the #ska and I'm so happy I did. Got me boppin' in my chair. Great chorus.
@tippyteapot - 2025-02-10
Oh you did some magic there lol. You write fantastic, catchy songs! A light hearted song about a frustrating situation.
@markfulwider - 2025-02-10
Great tune and love the lyrics! Happens all the time for sure! Thanks for putting it in a song! Blessings! Soooo HOW in the world did you get all that text up there upside down? I didn't even know you could do that! Hahaha!
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/dropped-the-ball Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #banjo #acoustic #antifolk
Lyrics
You are absolutely right this time no doubt, I messed things up Could’ve, should’ve done it right, in line but I’m afraid I screwed up Oh, I know I dropped the ball here yeah I totally dropped the ball
I’ll beg forgiveness, oh I am full of shame My bad, blew it again Go ahead, you’ve got the right to blame Sorry I failed as a friend Oh, I know I dropped the ball here yeah I totally dropped the ball
What can I do to make it up to you? What can I say to make it right?
I want to prove myself and turn the tide ‘Cause I know I dropped the ball here yeah I totally dropped the ball
I’m still not done, filled with regret Here I am on my knees I feel the worst you have ever met Could you forgive me please? Oh I know I dropped the ball here yeah I totally dropped the ball
What can I do to make it up to you? What can I say to make it right?
I want to prove myself and turn the tide ‘Cause I know I dropped the ball here yeah I totally dropped the ball I know I dropped the ball here yeah I totally dropped the ball
Great feel, Max! Very relaxed, never rushed...just a prefect tempo for this. Your voice is just perfect for this one.
@williamjames - 2025-02-17
Loved the banjo. You really get a lush sound out of this setup. Works like a charm. All of us have dropped the ball one time or the other. This sums up the expperience accurately.
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-13
Got the banjo out, Max! Nice. Great tune again. I especially like the groove in this one.
@tspoon - 2025-02-13
I do love the banjo sound. I like the happy melody for a confessional song. Hopefully you are forgiven!
@sycophant - 2025-02-12
Great song. Really like the sound of the banjo with your voice… also, thanks for sharing your recording process. Seems like a great system!
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/linksom-rechtsom Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. Here's a quicky to release the anger. #dutch #political #folkpunk
Linksom, rechtsom Je praat alles krom en je krijgt je gelijk want de meerderheid is dom
Ze trappen er in zeg maar dikke bult nu je aan de macht bent is het echt hun eigen schuld Maar laat mij met rust ook al leidt je het land met infantiel geleuter vul jij nu de krant
Linksom, rechtsom Je praat alles krom en je krijgt je gelijk want de meerderheid is dom
Linksom, rechtsom Je praat alles krom en je krijgt je gelijk want de meerderheid is dom
Met verworven rechten ga jij flink aan de haal Het maakt je niks uit je plukt de mensen kaal Je hebt lak aan alles je vermogen groeit en groeit Er is werkelijk niks anders wat jouw ook maar iets boeit
Linksom, rechtsom Je praat alles krom en je krijgt je gelijk want de meerderheid is dom
En mijn moeder zei altijd vrijheid slaat zomaar om
Plots zijn wij verloren en wie is er dan dom?
Left or Right
You can tell a good story, but you’re just a total jerk. The only thing you want is for me to fill your pockets. You have just one priority, and it needs to happen fast. No matter the cost, as long as it pays in cold, hard cash.
Left or right, you twist every word. And you get your way, because the majority is dumb.
Left or right, you twist every word. And you get your way, because the majority is dumb.
They fall for it, too bad for them. With you in power, it’s really their own fault. But leave me alone, even if you run the country. With your childish nonsense, you fill the papers headlines.
Left or right, you twist every word. And you get your way, because the majority is dumb.
You don’t care about human rights You don’t care, you strip people down to nothing. You have no shame, your fortune just keeps growing. There’s truly nothing else that matters to you.
Left or right, you twist every word. And you get your way, because the majority is dumb.
And my mother always said, freedom can turn in an instant.
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/witte-wieven Skirmish 02 PROMPT: Cryptids A “Songskirmish” — or simply “Skirmish” for short — is a timed challenge in which participants each create their own piece, but they are all inspired by the same prompt. A skirmish begins at a predetermined time when the prompt is released by the Skirmish host. The Skirmish lasts for approximately 60 minutes. https://write.fawm.org/songs/skirmishes/463 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Witte_Wieven Done in one hour after the prompt was given. My second skirmish this FAWM. In Dutch = Netherlands this time. I tried to whisper, that didn't work out very well π
Lyrics
Witte wieven dans daar niet mee witte wieven dat is geen goed idee
Witte wieven in de mist
witte wieven ga snel naar huis witte wieven het is hier echt niet pluis
Witte wieven in de mist Witte wieven in de mist
Witte wieven die worden je dood witte wieven je eindigt in de goot
Witte wieven in de mist Witte wieven in de mist Witte wieven, Witte wieven in de mist Witte wieven, Witte wieven in de mist
White women Don't dance along White women That could go wrong
White women in the mist
White women Try to get home White women It doesn't feel right
White women in the mist White women in the mist
White women try to stay alive White women it's not ending well
White women in the mist White women in the mist White women in the mist White women in the mist
#skirmish #cryptids #dutch
Comments
@overflow - 2025-02-13
Very cool! Love the repetition! I had to look up Witte Wieven … I’d never heard of them before.
@gordon - 2025-02-13
Catchy as ever Max. Your songs always make me nod along happily. Good gedaan veneer!
@lyricslinger - 2025-02-13
Sounds really good, and made me look up what the witte wieven are!
@haim - 2025-02-13
Your guitar playing is great, the deep voice as well. Cool rhythm and the background vocals add a subtle but nice element to the song. I like the emphasize you put on some lyrics with your accent and intonation.
@willow1 - 2025-02-13
Wunderbarr! Ga snel narr huis means try to get home?
@hmstreetteam - 2025-02-13
I like the idea of advising and protecting the Witte wieven. Good energy and flow in this song too. Very nice!
18. ✵ True Love π
2025-02-14
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/true-love Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #valentines #valentine #lovesong π PINK π
Lyrics
Like you to sing along To all the tunes that I know And you know with each song I feel the love grow
My days are bright I finally do care With you by my side I love to share It feels so right (new love) It feels so right (true love)
I want to take you to All the places that I love And you know when I do I just can’t get enough I want to take you to All the places that I love And you know when I do I just can’t get enough Of you
You bring the sun Together we are free It is so much fun Please let me be Your number one (new love) Your number one (true love)
Like you to sing along To all the tunes that I know And you know with each song I feel the love grow Like you to sing along To all the tunes that I know And you know with each song I feel the love grow So strong
In the embrace Of your arms I belong I found my place True love has begun Oh happy days (new love) Oh happy days (true love)
I want to take you to All the places that I love And you know when I do I just can’t get enough I want to take you to All the places that I love And you know when I do I just can’t get enough Of you
A dream come true So real and so new Can’t get enough Can’t get enough of you I just can’t get enough of you
19. ✯ I Can Explain (π€πππ£πππ€π03)
2025-02-14
Skirmish 03 PROMPT: It's hard to explain, but... -OR- ...I can explain! A “Songskirmish” — or simply “Skirmish” for short — is a timed challenge in which participants each create their own piece, but they are all inspired by the same prompt. A skirmish begins at a predetermined time when the prompt is released by the Skirmish host. The Skirmish lasts for approximately 60 minutes. https://write.fawm.org/skirmish/562
1H5W- valentines break-up song #1h5w #skirmish #singersongwriter
Lyrics
She asked how? How did this ever happen? She asked why? Why has it come this far?
It’s too late now The damage has been done It’s too late now She’s gone
She asked when? When should I’ve seen the signs? She asked where? Where did it all go wrong?
It’s too late now The damage has been done It’s too late now She’s gone
Words left unspoken Promises left to die I can explain But please don’t ask me why
She asked what? What was I even thinking? She asked who? But deep inside she always knew
It’s too late now The damage has been done It’s too late now She’s gone, she’s gone.
Words left unspoken Promises left to die I can explain But please don’t ask me why
She asked why? Why didn’t we try harder? She asked how? How did we fall apart?
It’s too late now The damage has been done It’s too late now She’s gone, she’s gone.
Comments
@frey - 2025-02-27
Simple, bittersweet chords. Hits me right in the heart. Your lyrics consist of a lot of questions and yet they tell such a clear story. Your main melody for your chorus is also really, really catchy and sweet
@freddie13 - 2025-02-15
This is beautiful, love your guitar picking, but yes heartbreaking. Great lyrics
@robinleaf - 2025-02-14
Awww this is heartbreaking. I love all the questions... And the way it feels like you're breathing into the chorus...so sad. I love the melody and the chords. Great write!!!
@mandolinda - 2025-02-14
Ah, sad song on Valentines Day. Today seems like a breakup day, sad and lonely, waiting and wondering. Good listen.
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/your-time-will-come Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #hope #acousticguitar #singersongwriter
Lyrics
Well look at me - I’ve made it through I’m pretty sure - you can do it too The road is rough- but you are strong Keep on holding on Keep on holding on
Just take a step- don’t look away Don’t be afraid - you’ll find your way There will be light- the past is gone Need to move along Need to move along
I’ve been there too, I've walked that road I know the weight, the heavy load but if I can rise, if I can fight So can you - just hold on tight
The day will come - you’ll feel alright you will find strength - feel the pride You will be back where you belong Just sing your song Just sing your song
You may think - it will never end But please take it - from a friend What’s in your way will be gone Your time will come Your time will come
I’ve been there too, I've walked that road I know the weight, the heavy load but if I can rise, if I can fight So can you - just hold on tight
Your time will come Your time will come Your time will come Your time will come
I really appreciate your liner notes. I've written more songs this year than any previous years already, even with being ill with something.
@theenglishassassin - 2025-02-20
Love your gravelly voice in this, and that second voice (just there) really adds something beautiful.
@jerrypettit - 2025-02-19
Gorgeous song! Is this the first one of yours I've heard--and you've been here 20 years?!!! Shame on us both! I'll start paying more attention! π Really, just an excellent song! ❤️
@arcane - 2025-02-18
This is beautiful! Lovely bittersweet vibe, the deep vocals are perfect here!
@kahlo2013 - 2025-02-16
So much positive support in this wonderfully crafted lyric. The gentle guitar strum and the warm tender emotive vocals deliver the sentiment so well. There is so much empathy and compassion coming through. Really moving. I also really liked reading about your process. Someday when I retire I want to spend more time trying to learn more about recording beyond my iPhone mic and my Voice Recorder App and Garage Band. To steal your lyric, I trust that my “time will come”. I just hope I’m still alive to appreciate it! Lovely song!
@sheslin - 2025-02-16
I'm here for the hope! Love your vocals, and beautiful backing vocals too. Such a beautiful message in your lyrics. Your melodic choices are making my ears very happy. Nice contrast with the "I've been there too" stanza - both in melody and message. I like the changing bridge throughout the song until you arrive at the final message and title line. This song feels like a gentle, encouraging hug - and I honestly do feel more hopeful!
@rekindle - 2025-02-16
Cool harmonies, really gives it a toned down anthemic crowd singalong vibe. And really cool you share some insight into your process!
21. ✯ Yes Zelensky, that's his land now! (πππππππππw3)
2025-02-16
Challenge: Public Domain "Yes Sir, That's My Baby" is a popular U.S. song from 1925. The music was written by Walter Donaldson and the original lyrics by Gus Kahn. Parody / Idiocracy From the perspective of the commander-in-chief of the United States Armed Forces. https://avatars.fawm.org/fawm2025/4b5c0dfe-3bdf-40fc-bbf8-b528b081a293.png
Lyrics
Yes, zelensky, that’s his land now, no zelensky, you’re not my friend now yes zelensky It’s his land now.
yes man, we’ve decided, no man, we won't hide it Yes man, you’re not invited now.
By the way, I won't pay when we reach agreement, we don’t care about your feelings
Yes, zelensky, that’s his land now, no zelensky, you're not my friend now yes zelensky It’s his land now.
Yes, zelensky, that’s his land now, no zelensky, you're not my friend now yes zelensky It’s his land now. #parody #idiocracy #publicdomain
Comments
@mikedelaney - 2025-02-23
clever song. enjoyed it.
@timfatchen - 2025-02-17
Bitter bitter bitter parody and it's exactly how I'm feeling. Great job Max. I feel the need to break something in frustration now. I guess I'l go a rip more old mortar out, at least that'll be something positive done. Hey, let's all start a war and be rewarded for it, right...poor Zelensky...
@kahlo2013 - 2025-02-16
This is such a great parody! Timely relevant and … uh… concerning. Great delivery and energy!
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-16
Nice one Max. We are living through very strange times ... some sardonic wit is always helpful in taking the bitter edge off the taste of things
@sherrycanary - 2025-02-16
Hilarious π The music πΆ is fun and old-timey
@phonopath - 2025-02-16
Fantastic bit of Protest Folk Punk in the folk tradition of using older familiar folk tunes.
@frozenlonesome - 2025-02-16
Great use of a public domain song to poke at the absurdity of now. Loved it!
@deandra - 2025-02-16
Great job and funny!
22. ✵ 32 Frames
2025-02-17
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/32-frames Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Visual_thinking #visualthinking #picturethinking #nonverbalthought
Lyrics
32 frames a second pictures in my mind I don’t think in words or sentences aligned Never-ending thoughts racing through my head Hoping to find my voice to explain what’s left unsaid
Trying so hard to blend in with a world full of text But before a line is finished I am seeing what comes next
I visualize it all the problems it might cause My mind’s a flickering movie without a break or pause.
32 frames a second too fast for you to see I’m lost in translation words don’t set me free
I’m drowning in detail images fill the air I get the total picture my thoughts are everywhere How can I explain myself without drawings or maps? I see the end before the start pictures fill the gaps
It’s not that I’m not listening I see things in a rush My mind likes to paint with an imaginary brush
I catch a glimpse of future scenes put the whole thing in a frame When I try to find the words they never sound the same
32 frames a second too fast for you to see I’m lost in translation words don’t set me free 32 frames a second too fast for you to see I’m lost in translation words don’t set me free
I really liked the line “ Trying so hard to blend in with a world full of text But before a line is finished I am seeing what comes next” This and the whole feel of the song, to me, really encapsulates how it just feels like everything in life and the world moves so fast from one thing to the next.
@headfirstonly - 2025-02-17
That's a fun concept, and the lyrics really dig in to some nice metaphors for things happening too fast to keep track of. Impeccably delivered as always, Max. (I've not come across video formats running at 32 fps but it scans a whole lot better than a technically accurate 59.94 fps would!)
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/trash-find Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #trash #guywithguitar #pedalbikeride
Lyrics
Every Sunday night I take my bike It feels so good Riding through the hood
I am gonna find Treasures left behind I pedal slow Knowing where to go
Trash to some, great find to me Why do they throw it away? Are they too blind to see?
My eyes are wide Where do the good things hide? In my hands They get a second chance
All kinds of wood Brand new, still good Hardware and screws Many things to reuse
Trash to some, great find to me Why do they throw it away? Are they too blind to see?
Every Sunday night I take my bike It feels so good Riding through the hood
Bulky waste A chest, a leather case Toys and pedal cars Speakers and guitars
Trash to some, great find to me Why do they throw it away? Are they too blind to see? Trash to some, great find to me Why do they throw it away? Are they too blind to see?
Hi Max, really enjoyed the insight into your songwriting process. I totally agree with you....it's not about having a fully polished production during FAWM, but rather something that's good enough. That said, I think this one's a real keeper. Great catchy melody, and very relateable lyrics. Plus, not enough songs with bikes in them. Great stuff Max!
Skrirmish prompt: Hinterhand A “Songskirmish” — or simply “Skirmish” for short — is a timed challenge in which participants each create their own piece, but they are all inspired by the same prompt. A skirmish begins at a predetermined time when the prompt is released by the Skirmish host. The Skirmish lasts for approximately 60 minutes. https://write.fawm.org/skirmish/578 Danke fΓΌr die Organisation @mashala A half hour quick improv. Sorry for the mistakes in German to all native speaking Germans. #hinterhand #skirmish #german
Lyrics
Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Das noch hilfreich sein kann Das noch hilfreich sein kann Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand. Das noch hilfreich sein kann Das noch hilfreich sein kann Zum GlΓΌck habe ich noch etwas in der Hinterhand.
Luckily, I still have something up my sleeve That might come in handy
Comments
@gbg2016 - 2025-02-23
So simple and so effective! Wonderful vocal doubles.
@hmstreetteam - 2025-02-20
I like the idea of having a scheme or strategy. Nice compact sound!
@spotlightkid - 2025-02-20
Very NDW! You should put a quirky electronic beat underneath it!
@spidersinatrenchcoat - 2025-02-20
I love the camera effects. And of course, the repetition is really nice in this one. Takes me back to downloading random songs off of mIRC and finding some obscure Krautrock tune. You captured a certain feel to be sure.
25. ✯ Go! (π€πππ£πππ€π05)
2025-02-20
Skirmish prompt: Go! A “Songskirmish” — or simply “Skirmish” for short — is a timed challenge in which participants each create their own piece, but they are all inspired by the same prompt. A skirmish begins at a predetermined time when the prompt is released by the Skirmish host. The Skirmish lasts for approximately 60 minutes. https://write.fawm.org/skirmish/492 Thanks @nightwing521 for hosting. Just lyrics this time. Demo update one day later #skirmish #demoupdate #acoustic
Lyrics
Honey, tell me what we’re gonna do today should we pack our bags or should we stay right here at home? Honey, tell me what you wanna do with me have you got a plan, or shall we see how far we roam?
We don’t need to plan ahead Leave behind what holds us back Go! let’s just go
Honey, tell me, are you gonna be okay? are you feeling like you wanna stay right here at home Honey, tell me what you wanna dream about is there something you can’t live without Many roads to Rome
We don’t need to plan ahead Leave behind what holds us back Go! let’s just go
Tell me where your heart would like to be tell me where your heart would like to be tell me where your heart would like to be Let’s just go let’s just go let’s just go
Comments
@cblack - 2025-02-21
Sounds promising to me. Definitely got some good bones with these lyrics. Hoping you turn it into sound. π
@alyak72 - 2025-02-20
I really like these lyrics and I'm curious about the music you'll be adding to it. The track "The Way" by Fastball came to mind while reading, though yours is probably a lot less devastating.
@hmstreetteam - 2025-02-20
I like the message of spontaneity and the hint of the power of flow. It works to contrast “go” with other words like “be” and “do.”
26. ✵ Something
2025-02-21
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/something-2 Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #acousticrock #guywithguitar #acousticgaragepunk
Lyrics
Wonder what it is that pulls you back, The weight you carry, the things you lack. Wonder what it is that holds you down, There’s something chasing you around.
Something keeps you quiet, Something breaks your will, I wonder still.
Wonder what it is you hide inside, A truth untold, a place denied. Wonder what it is you can’t define, Something kept behind the line.
Something keeps you quiet, Something breaks your will, I wonder still.
Something keeps you quiet, Something breaks your will, I wonder still.
Wonder what it is that pulls you back, Wonder if you'll ever find the track.
Sounds amazing! Love reading about your process, and the video is cool. And that guitar part is so fun!
@wobbiewobbit - 2025-03-05
yay! nice little punchy, catchy number. I really like the lyrics and it just has that punky-boppiness that is just so enjoyable. Nice one!
@cloudboy - 2025-02-27
Fascinating to read how you go about recording for FAWM. The guitar tempo is a nice contrast to the elongated notes you sing. It's like the music is in a battle with your voice. Engaging listen, Max!
@tamsnumber4 - 2025-02-21
Thanks for writing out your process. Mine is slow, like walking through mud. I really like this song, very upbeat, great vocal dynamics, hope this makes it to the "keeper pile"!
@ampersandman - 2025-02-21
I like how the melody flows over the fast e-G-chord changes. The lyrics are very effective. Short and sweet, not a gram of fat too much. Good song, i like it.
27. ✯ Die Reise des Ballons (π€πππ£πππ€π06)
2025-02-21
Nur Liedtexte.. #sgermish #skirmish #drugs
Lyrics
Ich bin ein Ballon, rund und klein Ganz voll mit coke, das kann doch nicht sein Ein Mann schluckte mich so hinein, huura ab in den Bauch, die Reise war da
Ich bin ein Ballon, dumm und klein Aber Bitte, am Zielort woll ich nicht sein. Die Reise von magen zu darm endet am Flughaven, nein! alarm!
Comments
@momentegalerie - 2025-02-21
Oh wow... That's a kind of usage I didn't think of in the first place! π₯Ή
@heather - 2025-02-21
Oh no! Terrible luck!
@hummingbear - 2025-02-21
Now that is a different kind of balloon song, and quite a different sort of adventure! Very creative or maybe you've just been reading the news.
28. ✯ This morning I buried my cat (πππππππππw4)
2025-02-22
Challenge W4: Personal Soundtrack π
Our cat, Knoert, had thyroid problems. Medication worked fine for a year or so. Last few days she had trouble breathing. Yesterday she was in a special oxygen room at the veterinarian. But she was struggling. We had to put her to sleep. This morning, february 22nd, I buried her in our garden. Today's personal soundtrack. π https://avatars.fawm.org/fawm2025/9678af46-77aa-4c15-bd49-6d8a69a94c73.png #cats #personalsoundtrack #catlove
Lyrics
Seventeen years a lifetime in fur A little soul with a gentle purr
Curled up close so satisfied Safe and warm by my side
You had your ways a heart so true Soft and kind to the ones you knew
Sometimes scared sometimes proud it will be hard to live without
You’re resting in our garden deep beneath the earth, in peaceful sleep
I still hear you feel you near Hard to believe you’re not here
Tiny paws once walked this land All those years. But here it ends.
You’re resting in our garden deep beneath the earth, in peaceful sleep
Forever close and never far I close my eyes and there you are
Tiny paws once walked this land For many years. But here it ends.
I know the pain of losing a pet all too well. I don't have any animals right now and probably won't again for a long time but not a day goes by when I don't miss mine. Really love this parting song, gives me a Johnny Cash vibe.
@thwingbill - 2025-02-24
So hard to lose a good friend whether human, feline or canine. We have lost more than one of our canine friendsd. We always bury them hear a highway where we can drive by and remember them by giving a mournful howl. I wrote a song about it too.
@theenglishassassin - 2025-02-23
Beautiful, Max. Very touching for this cat man, who has had to bury two beautiful fur-souls over the last couple of years.
@mikegtz - 2025-02-22
Very sweet, Max. I did my cat song a couple years back and it helped me deal with the loss. We lost both our cats a year apart and I feel this loss.
@heather - 2025-02-22
Awww, Knoert :( I am so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful tribute to your wonderful kitty, we can hear how much you love and miss her.
@tamsnumber4 - 2025-02-22
I am so sorry for your heart. This is a beautifully sad write.
@cathreu - 2025-02-22
I'm so sorry for your loss, that is an unfathomable pain. Your dear cat will always be with you and live on through the life blooming in your garden. Thanks for pouring your experience into these heartfelt lyrics.
@cmharwood89 - 2025-02-22
I'm really sorry to hear that - what a lovely tribute to little Knoert. Each short stanza is clearly deeply personal, while also being very universal to anybody who loses an animal companion of many years. Our older lady passed a couple of years ago, and I took some consolation in knowing that we had - through veterinary intervention - given her as much time as she cared to take. That sounds like the case here too. Rest in peace, Knoert.
29. ✵ Thrown Off My Game
2025-02-24
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/thrown-off-my-game Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #guywithguitar #acoustic #singersongwriter
Lyrics
Thrown off my game When you are looking at me I’m not the same When you are talking to me
I’m blown away When you tell me you like me Don’t know what to say When you are kind to me
Caught in the thrill nervous inside why am I dying feeling alive
Half of me is anxious a little undone don’t want to wake up from this dream that’s begun
Thrown off my game When you’re looking at me I’m not the same When you’re talking to me
I’m blown away When you tell me you like me Don’t know what to say when you’re kind to me
I can’t look away just gotta man up my heartbeat’s a drum the fear’s got to stop
I want to feel easy comfortable and fine and tell you I like you without crossing the line
There is some innocence and simplicity in this song which draws me in. The chorus is memorable. Great job.
@tspoon - 2025-02-24
I really like your style and the sound you get. It is familiar to me, yet very unique to you. Very easy to listen and relate. Great playing and vocal performance as well. and sorry to hear about your cat :(
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/defense Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #guywithguitar #acoustic #singersongwriter
Lyrics
I want you to take my hand and guide me through This guarded land of your defense You've built a wall around your heart High and strong let us try and make a start
I’m asking you to open up so I can reach your mind Don’t shut me out or make me stop There’s so much trust to find
Please! Let me in Please! Let me in
I see the scars that time can’t heal hidden deep behind a layered coat of steel Every word you’ve left unsaid weighs so heavy, like stone and like lead If you let go just for a while of the fear and anger, try to smile You might find a softer place where love and hope will fill that darkened space
I’m asking you to open up so I can reach your mind Don’t shut me out or make me stop There’s so much trust to find
Please! Let me in Please! Let me in
I know it’s hard to break the chain of every hurt and hidden pain I know it’s hard to break the chain of every hurt and hidden pain
Love the hypnotic two chord groove on the verses, and the plaintive way you deliver the ‘please let me in’ is really effective. ‘Layered coat of steel’ is a great image. And I really enjoyed reading about your process. Nice one, Max!
@wynia - 2025-02-26
I love the shift to the hook, that is delicious. Love the chords and vocals there! Really interesting slightly tropical vibe for the verses. Nice listen π
Waar is toch mijn koppie? waar liet ik hem nu staan? Hij was toch niet al op? en in de vaatwasser gedaan? Ik lust nog wel een bakkie ik dacht dat ik nog had Is er nog een beetje? In de kan wellicht nog wat?
Heeft iemand heel misschien? mijn troost ergens gezien? Mijn leut is zomaar foetsie in dat fijne kleine kopje bovendien
Nog een extra slokkie graag er nog wat bij Nee niet in zo’n mok sta ik toch weer in de rij Hoe kom ik nu aan koffie? schuif eens ff door Tjonge wat een sof ik mag vast wel even voor?
Heeft iemand heel misschien? mijn troost ergens gezien? Mijn leut is zomaar foetsie in dat fijne kleine kopje bovendien
Nice guitar energy right away! I did Google translate so I got an idea of the lyrics :) Vocals match perfectly with the guitar! Love the positive momentum! Cheers, Smudge
@robertfrederickmusic - 2025-02-26
Unfortunately I couldn't understand the lyrics, but your performance and the groove was great.
https://studio273.bandcamp.com/track/hibernate Over 20 years of participating in February Album Writing Month (FAWM), I’ve developed a workflow that allows me to quickly create a decent recording of a freshly written song. My process always starts with guitar chords and humming a melody. Once a few words come to mind the songcrafting starts. Despite all the digital possibilities out there, I prefer to keep things pure by using real instruments. I print the lyrics in large text, hang them above a camera, and play the song several times in a row. Usually, the fourth or fifth take is good enough. Thanks to FAWM, I’ve learned not to dwell too long on whether something is "perfect."
Next, I separate the one-take audio track from the video and load it into a mixing program. Most of the effects I use are already preset. Then I record additional vocal tracks and layer in more instruments like guitar, banjo, piano, and keyboard. Once the mix sounds decent, I sync it back with the video footage. Each year, I choose a different color theme for my two-tone videos.
If a song is recorded this way during FAWM, it’s done. After FAWM, I usually end up with three or four keepers, which I test live on stage. Songs often grow and evolve during live performances, but I never rerecord them. Around 90% of the songs I’ve written over the past 20 years were created during FAWM—simple and effective.
These days, I use ChatGPT to check my lyrics for grammar and spelling mistakes and to give suggestions. In the past, I relied on native-speaking FAWMers for this. The audio mix I upload to Bandcamp is the same as the one in the videos. My style is defined by one-take, single-mic recordings with additional vocals and instruments. #guitar #acoustic #singersongwriter
Lyrics
I want to hibernate ‘till it’s over
It’s all too much too many fools trying to rule the world
They’re repeating history why can’t they see
I want to hibernate till it’s over Don’t keep me up-to-date just wake me when it’s over
Don’t want to run No lust to fight Please let me hide
Don’t call me no coward Just let me quit I’m not up for it
I want to hibernate till it’s over Don’t keep me up-to-date just wake me when it’s over
What happened to common sense? So this is how it ends
They all pray to a low IQ sorry, can’t do
I want to hibernate till it’s over don’t keep me up-to-date just wake me when it’s over
Thanks for the detailed liner notes. Really interesting to hear all the steps in your personal process and how it’s evolved to become such a consistent and effective method for you. I’ve learned some cool stuff from doing FAWM. Got way more than I expected to from being here. And I totally relate to the wish to hibernate π’ I hope this isn’t how it ends.
@theenglishassassin - 2025-02-27
I really love that chorus: "I want to hibernate till it’s over don’t keep me up-to-date just wake me when it’s over" I wish it were an option. I actually think it's wise not to overdose on news, but being in Canada makes it kinda hard to look away!
Some wonderful tunes there Max. Another impressively productive FAWM and your album is already available on Bandcamp!
@max - 2025-02-28
Thank you all for the FAWMsomeness. Here's the selection that made it on this years February Album, Written this Month. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZZZUfEH0fc https://maxvanremmerden.bandcamp.com/album/guess-what
@wynia - 2025-02-24
Catching up here on comments...thanks much for stopping by "Common" a few days ago! My group is full of multi-instrumentalists and we can never resist orchestrating using many! We just put up another one last night with the flugelhorn and cello if you'd like to check it out - "Everyone Has a First Heartbreak". Thanks for your kind words!
@mikedelaney - 2025-02-23
thank you for the comment on my song.
@theenglishassassin - 2025-02-22
Thanks for taking the time to listen to Duck and Cover. Be like Bert! π
@rekindle - 2025-02-21
Bedankt voor je mooie woorden bij "Praat Met Mij"!
@tamsnumber4 - 2025-02-20
Thanks for listening to mine and Cindyrella's song "No Begging"!
@zu_blus - 2025-02-17
I'm very glad you appreciated my song, thankds for the comment and good job on the challenge, you're a songwriting machine!
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-17
Yeah, Emilia used to sing along with your songs when she was about three years old but she's almost twenty now (!) so that was was a while back :) ... she especially liked the one with "you act like a fish on a line .." ... I love that one too - brilliant melody and great idea - and I remember covering it at the Backstage once, way back when...
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-16
Thanks for the comments Max. I lost track of your page for some reason over the past few days ... there's no let up in your productivity ... kudos to you, good man!
@freddie13 - 2025-02-14
Thanks for your comment on the skirmish I will listen to some of your songs.
@dutch - 2025-02-14
Tuuuuuuuuurlijk ben ik er weer bij! Al was het maar om jou een beetje in de gaten te houden. Jij bent gewoon single-handedly verantwoordelijk voor zeker de helft van alle fawm songs dit jaar! Laat je nog wat cloud ruimte voor ons over? ;)
@willow1 - 2025-02-14
Cuidado con las cabras!!
@markfulwider - 2025-02-10
Hey there! Thanks for popping by to comment on @wsharper69 and mine collaboration! You have definitely NOT been a FAWM Stalker THIS year! I am counting 14 songs so far and we are not even HALFWAY through! You go! Blessings!
@ceilidh - 2025-02-09
OMG! Thank you SO much for your kind comments on "You Can't Fight Mother Nature"! I know folks who have fled or are thinking of fleeing to Amsterdam (thank you) to escape the persecution the Orange One would like to pursue here. I hope the courts can keep him from having his selfish way until we can change our congress and/or until we can PRY the megalomaniac out of OUR White House.
@katestantonsings - 2025-02-08
Likewise, Max!! I look forward to catching up on your songs throughout Feb. & March! You're rocking this FAWM my friend!
@katestantonsings - 2025-02-06
I ended up using the Dutch phrase, "Wie goed doet goed ontmoet" for my comment challenge! I hope you enjoy. Thanks for the creative suggestions, Max!
@rogerhammond - 2025-02-03
Hi Max, thanks for your lovely comment on 'It all passes'. It's quite something to feel a song in that way. Really glad you liked it.
@lukas - 2025-02-03
Hey Max, nice to see you here! I see you're rolling along already, good on you. Happy songwriting!
@sapient - 2025-02-03
Max, you have no idea how much that comment means to me! Thank you so much! π
@katestantonsings - 2025-02-03
Hi Max! I have Dutch ancestors :) let’s see what I can come up with!! πΆdank u welπΆ
@nuj4x - 2025-02-02
What’s up Max? Long time no see π
@plushbaby - 2025-02-02
Yes Max, ride or die babeeeee! π€
@marklberry - 2025-02-01
Looking forward to hearing your masterpieces this year. Let me know if I can help with words :)
@alphagal - 2025-02-01
Thx for the welcome Max! Good fawming to ya!
@gordon - 2025-02-01
Great stuff Max, more of this sort of thing please and have a great 2025
@cowex - 2025-01-31
Heck yeah 2006. Wow, I don't even remember that web layout, but I believe you :D
@stevenwesleyguiles - 2025-01-31
Max, great to see you keeping up the good Fawmfight!
@chasingandromeda - 2025-01-31
Glad to see you back, Max!
@tamsnumber4 - 2025-01-30
Happy FAWMing!
@fireball - 2025-01-30
looking forward to hearing some of your stuff this year. happy fawming.
@_kim - 2025-01-30
Thanks for the warm welcome! Wish you a lot of fun and succes reaching your goals in your 20th edition!
@slusk - 2025-01-30
Hey there! I'm a madman (too?) but not the productive type unfortunately ;)
@johnnycashpoint - 2025-01-30
Thank you! And to you!
@morti - 2025-01-30
2006 Old Guard Represent!
@reinderd - 2025-01-30
Looking forward to hearing your work! Hope I'll be able to keep up with it!
@stephenwordsmith - 2025-01-30
Hi Max! Thanks for the warm welcome - and congratulations on the big 2-0!
Thanks for the warm welcome and happy FAWMing. Looking forward to hearing your stuff.
@musicsongwriter - 2025-01-29
Thank you so much, Max. Happy songwriting. Have a great time. it is amazing to see when you joined FAWM. I'm looking forward to hearing your February songs.
@headfirstonly - 2025-01-29
Hi Max - "create like a madman" is definitely the way to go. Have at it, and happy FAWMing!
@timfatchen - 2025-01-29
Goodness me! You were 2006?? I remember your encouragement when i came in in 2007. And our competition for the last word! Thanks for the kind thoughts and I've passed on to Deborah.
@mikeskliar - 2025-01-28
hey, yeah indeed- the class of 2006 rocks! great to see ya back!!
@jinx - 2025-01-28
Hey there, fellow old-timer! Great to see you back :)
@axl - 2025-01-28
Hey Max, have a great FAWM 2025!
@paulotteson - 2025-01-28
Same to you @max - Have a great FAWM!
@robynmackenzie - 2025-01-28
Happy 20th!!! Holy guacamole!
@nancyrost - 2025-01-28
It was fun to see your enthusiasm, clamoring to start the challenge! Thanks for fawming with me all these years. :-)
@yam655 - 2025-01-28
Happy FAWM! Welcome back!
@ericdistad - 2025-01-28
Hey Max! It's great to see you back again! 20 Years? It's hard to believe! Have a fantastic FAWM!
@phylo - 2025-01-28
Hey Max. A good time will be had by all. See you in there!
@gordon - 2025-01-28
Hi Max, have a good one sir!
@burr - 2025-01-28
Haha, we saw that you snuck in early. No worries, we did have to manually re-adjust your early donation once we reset the site for this year, but that was easy. Thanks for kicking the tires, and for being part of this community for so long! π€π€π€π€π€π€
@sapient - 2025-01-28
Hay Max - Wishing you an AMAZING FAWMbruary! π
@mikegtz - 2025-01-28
Hi Max, welcome back!
@katestantonsings - 2025-01-28
I hope you have a wonderful FAWM, Max!!
@glines - 2025-01-28
Hey Max! It’s been a very long time. I hope life is treating you well. Looking forward to hearing your songs this year.
